Book 17. Part Four. 9 End

The last part of Part Four. And, yes, it’s a little weird. These are raws and I’ll clean it up in one of my editing passes before I give it to my copyeditor; otherwise, he’d likely delete it and email “what the f*ck was that!?”

It’s a matter of Chekov’s Gun: you mention the rifle over the mantlepiece in Act One, it damn well better go off later. Konev and his team came across Joseph, so here he is again.

I’m half done with the Epilogue. That half is about Bob, El, others, and yes, “Joseph” gets an explanation. The second half, hopefully later today – BTW, it’s 0500 right now – will be about Konev. Then, for all contented porpoises, I’ll be finished and able to begin my three editing passes.

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Book 17. Part Four. 8

The penultimate scene from Part Four. We’re back to Bob and his team tomorrow. I’m about finished with the Epilogue, but that may have to wait until after the conference. Or, if I’ve a moment, I may post it from there.

It’s taken a year, but I am pleased as to where everything seems to be going. I wonder what my next project will be? I’m thinking of taking it easy and writing a few short stories for the rest of summer.

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Book 17. Part Four. 7

Back to Bob’s rescue mission. It starts well…

I’m already into the epilogue and may finish the raw MS before Imaginarium after all. I could copy it to a flash drive and hand it to my copyeditor, I suppose.

Would a highly trained soldier really steal a look at a girl in the middle of a rescue mission? Sorry, ladies, men are pigs.

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Book 17. Part Four. 5

These next few will be shorter as I’ll only be posting the immediate change of POV. In this case to Bob.

The C4 is an addition I thought of later: not all doors in a prison will be connected to an electrical system, certainly not one connected to the Net. More direct action will be needed.

Had to watch some old “Bob and Doug” on Youtube to get the accent right.

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Book 17. Part Four. 4

Taking the advice of a fellow writer, I am just going to bull ahead with this and worry about head-hopping and formatting later. I had fretted myself into a standstill and that’s worse than writing dreck.

So, this is very, very raw. Raw-er than usual. One of the things I do not like as how I shoehorned the demon’s cart into this installment. I know he crops up in about three or four installments, but I needed the foreshadowing. I’ll fix it later.

With Imaginarium coming up in less than a week, I’ll be busy packing, buying food and booze, completing my very rough outline for the panel I’m hosting (I noted several assistant panelists have been added; I hope one hour is enough time), so I’ve doubts about completing the MS. But, you never know… this Part is going to be moving very fast.

And, yes: I just made up “the Three R’s.” I’m proud of that.

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Book 17. Part Four. 2

Easy to get sidetracked whenever Reina drops in. Trying not to. Since Bob revealed something personal about her, she did the same, giving Konev his answer.

I’ve seen the “action sequence” coming up but am having trouble writing it without making things confusing or coming across like an idiot. I’m sure it’ll work out.

Reina has a family? Yep. Her daughter on a research trip? Yep.

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Book 17. Part Four. 1

Getting back into the swing of things for this final section. As the events take place over only two days, I think it will be shorter; perhaps about 10,000 words. There may be an epilogue but I have not gotten that far.

Going back to Part One, Sergeant Major Sergei Konev of the Imperial Russia Army is back as our main character, but another shows up almost immediately. Like an invasive weed, Reina has to make an appearance, too.

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LibertyCon 35

Post-mortem sounds prejudicial, so lets say reflexions, instead.

I told my daughters, growing up, that, “if everyone in your life is an asshole, it’s you.” So I am really trying here. From Thursday evening, wandering over to the Chattanoogan Convention Center to get my bearings, I found the Registration table and asked if I could check in. This is not unusual for cons as it helps to lessen the crush for Fridays. I was told by a hipster Tribesman that they’d be open tomorrow around eleven. “So, ten thirty? Eleven thirty?” I asked. “I said eleven!” “No, you said around eleven and I was seeking clarification. Thank you.” As I walked away, my wife heard (I’ve some hearing loss), “You’re fucking welcome.” This was not an auspicious beginning.

After getting checked in the next day, I had about thirty minutes before my first panel, “How to Elevator Pitch Your Game.” I wanted to learn how to do that with a book, but that panel was Sunday at 1400, so I dropped in. The panelists were Bill Fawcett and Steve Jackson; yes, that Steve Jackson. I explained my situation and Fawcett said, fine, you’ve got thirty seconds. I started in on Machine Civilization and he stopped me after one sentence. I tried again and made it to the second sentence. He stopped me again at “demi-human”: NO JARGON. Deep breath. I made it three sentences and he said good enough. That’s why I go to panels: I’m ignorant and want to learn. I want harsh, constructive criticism. We were both dicks but he make me older and I appreciate him for it.

The other panel which clicked was QED, Quantum Electrodynamics, by Hans Schantz. It was very professionally done and also hilarious. We have enough information for electrical engineers to build the tech world we live in but it seems all, ALL, of the underpinning math is either guesswork or wrong. So much for science.

Which led to the Quantum Brain panel. Given what I write about, the nature of intelligence is of interest to me. It was semi-adversarial, with Robert Hampson taking the wetwork approach and Travis Taylor a more theoretical. Very interesting. Until the end. I didn’t have the chance to ask my question, so I stopped Taylor on his way out. “Are you familiar with the works of Julian Jaynes and the bicameral mind? That consciousness might be very recent in humans and even now not widespread?” “Are you saying most people are NPCs?” he laughed. “Yes, I am. So you are familiar with the idea?” He turned on his heel and walked away from me. Fuck that guy.

The other panels were, well, here goes my objectivism, like the con, overrun by Boomers. At 56, I was one of the youngest people there. And the panels on Self-publishing, Marketing, ChatGPT/AI, were all off the rails in minutes. I’ve given many lectures and have run many panels in very different environments. I allow short questions while I’m talking but reserve most to the end. These panels were hijacked and ruined by, “well, back in the 70’s, the law says…” It’s not the fucking 70’s, you old fool. That world is dead and the only law comes from the barrel of gun.

The only publisher of note in the so-called Dealers Room was Three Ravens, a good company, in my opinion. I didn’t stay to chat as I’ll see them in a month at Imaginarium.

Saying all that to say this: I’m happy my wife got to play tourist and visit the Tennessee Aquarium, Rock City, and other places while I watched my life burn. I have no intention of ever going back to LibertyCon.